Eradication of anti-social elements is one of the factors that contribute to the peace and harmony of any country. This responsibility majorly lies on the shoulders of the governing body and partly on citizens. This essay will put a spotlight on both sides and eventually conclude with a personal opinion.
As mentioned earlier, it's mostly the ruling body's duty to avoid criminal activities and safeguard citizens' rights. With such superlative power and an extensively strong police force, it is easy to curb illegal activities when compared to normal people. Moreover, crimes generally occur on a large scale which is out of people's reach. For example, let's consider the terror attacks. Special and sophisticated surveillance is required to tackle this issue. Higher-level intelligence and machinery are to be indulged which can effectively fight anti-national activities. This kind of humongous task can only be achieved by the government.
Although the general public cannot do much in this regard, they can help the governing officials in doing the job. Anti-legal activities where ever visible must be reported by us to be eliminated. There should exist social responsibility and accountability in the men and women of a nation. We can collectively avoid petty mishappenings going around us. For instance, let us talk about cybercrimes. These can mostly be prevented by just following some safety measures and using approved sites. Staying cautious can control most of the daily occurring atrocities from taking over.
Crime prevention is one of the basic necessary aspects to be looked into. Coming to my personal opinion, public donat have much to do in this regard. Only a powerful organization like the government can effectively bring this to a halt. Thus this essay is concluded in the light of the above stated information.
- Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences 71
- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparisons where relevant 11
- Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend is a positive or negative development 56
- Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities What are the reasons Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages 78
- the bar charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing coutries and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31849315068 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0354812881 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664383561644 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7599122459 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9523809524 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09523809524 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157405871718 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429640603443 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414093079267 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936655603897 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246481185852 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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