Some people think that the government should increase spending on defense, but spend less on social benefits.
To what extent do you agree?
Defense system plays an important role in public, because it protects human right. Therefore, some politicians think that more of the budget should be allocated to it, but less to the advantages of society. This essay disagrees with their opinion.
Let us start with reasons why some politicians argue that the public authority should spend more of the budget on military regardless of public benefits. The first reason is that it ensures safety. Many people complain that the crime rate has increased lately, so the government should hire more police officers to secure the order of law. Another reason is that it can give the ability to stop any attempt of external invasion. Governments should satisfy military needs, including purchase of tanks and planes as well as support an enough number of soldiers to repel any attack, shostile neighbors may cross the border and invade. Furthermore, it allows the government to sell weapons. Funding military needs can also provide another source of financing the budget, because many countries are willing to buy different types of weapon abroad.
However, some sociologists believe that the government should focus more on the demands of society than on those of military. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, it enables to open more workplaces. The government should concentrate on the economy rather than on the army, as many people face unemployment and seek jobs to support their families. Secondly, it secures the provision of better health care. The money spent on weapons could go to bring the condition of hospitals to the world standards. In addition, it lets to improve the quality of education. The government could both build more schools and recruit more teachers, so that they can supply labor market with high-qualified graduates.
In conclusion, even though some politicians state that the authorities should give more money to protection at the expense of public programs, I think that social needs are a higher priority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24382716049 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65921706066 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595679012346 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7141246368 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4210526316 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188099433738 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456536447106 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055876633368 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108676422865 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233823615232 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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