Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people like the homeless and the unemployed. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people are having the viewpoint that section of the society who are jobless and below poverty line. They have no accomodation to live and should be protected by the government. Representatives chosen by the common people at the time of elections took the responsibility for taking care of every person. Welfare of the country is associated with people residing in it.
Most common saying of constitution is, “By the people,For the people”. So, it is public, regardless employed or unemployed,rich or poor, builders or homeless who selects each candidate who further leads to the formation of government. Therefore, the authorities must have taken care of their citizens. Weaker section needs more care and protection. In addition to this, equal opportunities should be giveb to the people in the field of education and employment. Equal pay for equal work should be the propaganda of the government. Globalization and modernization should help in better standards of living rather than leaving the poor section behind. Atleast, basic needs must be fulfilled by the administrative authorities.
On the other hand,with the growing Capitalism,richer are becoming rich and poorer more poor. Officials, by keeping an eye over these types of startegies will prove good for these societal issues. For instance, tax evasion, black marketing, hoardinh, adulteration, excise crimes,confedential international treaties etc create a lot of hinderance in the development. Authorities must diverge the expenditure process to the lower section
In my opinion, by keeping check on all the illegal transactions in the country which will led to the profits. Common people have hopes from the leaders in whom they inculcate their trust while choosing them. Some new schemes should also be launched by government for providing jobs. Giving shelter is the right of every citizen. Consciousness among authorities coukd be prove beneficial to the welfare of the society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , richer
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Suggestion: , confedential
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hinderance seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of hinderances'.
Suggestion: a lot of hinderances
...ntial international treaties etc create a lot of hinderance in the development. Authorities must di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48355263158 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24597389393 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6176820126 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.35 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183695779217 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508415618171 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480449977796 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109971346175 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07532461924 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.