You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.1- Say where you think you left the papers.2- Explain why they are so important3- Tell

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir

I am writing this letter in connection with the documenta which i left at your hotel last night while attending the conference of ambassadors.

In my rememberance, i left them at the reception table of the hotel main entrance. As i was about to check out. The receptionist asked me to complete some formalities regarding checking out. I put them on that table and forgoted to took them back in my hand.

The documents are very important for me as it constitutes of terms and conditions of the main deal for which meeting was held in the banquet. I am the top most organiser of this event and all the records have been there in the documents so, it is very important for me to find it again.

it would be appreciated if you can look upon this matter once and help me out in getting my documents back by consulting your staff members. Thanking you.
yours sincerely,
xyz

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir I am writing this letter in connection w...
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... in connection with the documenta which i left at your hotel last night while att...
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...of ambassadors. In my rememberance, i left them at the reception table of the...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
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...ption table of the hotel main entrance. As i was about to check out. The reception...
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...on table of the hotel main entrance. As i was about to check out. The receptionis...
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...cuments are very important for me as it constitutes of terms and conditions of the main deal f...
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... important for me to find it again. it would be appreciated if you can look up...
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...ting your staff members. Thanking you. yours sincerely, xyz
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...members. Thanking you. yours sincerely, xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5652173913 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70199899709 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2360029099 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180147562679 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763828501813 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967759919163 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103445832858 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517232063165 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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