Some people think that human history has been a journey from
ignorance to knowledge. Others argue that this underestimates the
achievements of ancient cultures, and overvalues our achievements.
It is a general opinion in scientific circles that human race has moved from living a rough life in caves to the present technological era; but I believe that ancient civilizations and cultures had their glories and achievements that cannot be matched and compared to the modern human knowledge. This essay will encompass both the arguments with examples.
Humans started their journey on this planet by living a nomadic life and gradually developed into clans and devised languages to make communications stronger. Fire was a huge discovery in the basic human history, and then the times observed different ages like medieval, Bronze Age, Silver Age, Industrial Revolution and the current Digital Age we have stepped in recent decades. In the chronology of human race, we also observe that humans of the past had to live a difficult life without the comforts we take for granted today. With the addition of knowledge and progress, the whole human race has had numerous inventions to ease the life of everyday human beings including air conditioning, cars and airplanes just to name a few.
But on the other hand, when we look deeply into some of the previous civilizations, our scientific knowledge and sanity becomes baffled at times. The magnificent architecture and monuments created by our predecessors like Egyptian Pyramids, Temples, Indus civilization and Buddha statues are among so many things that inspire and intrigue our minds even today in the 21st century. On the other hand, spiritual knowledge, astrology, spirits and knowledge of the metaphysical dimensions was owned by some previous cultures. In fact, it can be justified to say that there are some mystical revelations and hidden prophecies that keep on becoming reality and modern science remains in awe with all that knowledge.
Hence, I would say that we as human race have advanced a lot in many ways, but there are some mystic aspects of the olden civilizations that will keep on inspiring us and put us to think of the abilities and knowledge our forefathers had.
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- Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology.To what extent do you agree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he other hand, when we look deeply into some of the previous civilizations, our scientific ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, then, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10119047619 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81501053232 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592261904762 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5641521771 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.818181818 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185811701878 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695880357951 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326354675639 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106024825054 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235442981233 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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