Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
Countries around the globe are already facing significant issues relating to the environment, as a result of exploding population. In the coming years, this will put pressure on / throttle / suffocate other areas like health, infrastructure and education. This essay will discuss the problems Australia will face in the next ten years and also suggest the possible solutions to overcome these problems.
In the coming years, the ever-growing population, will not only increase the burden on the education system, but also limit the availability of jobs in the market. This will further lead to a shortage of skilled / white collar jobs and people will have to do menial jobs to earn a living. For example, in Australia, highly educated people work odd jobs due to a lack of skilled jobs that match their educational qualifications. Due to the increasing powers of the ruling party, corruption is another menace that threatens Australia. For example, it is said that the Liberal party came into power after they offered huge amounts of money to businesses across Australia.
The need of the hour is to wake up from our slumber and work hard on the solutions to make a better tomorrow. The most important step is to attract workforce to regional areas by offering incentives like improved infrastructure and availability of jobs. This will not only reduce the pressure on cities, but also promote development of regional areas. Additionally, there needs to be an upper limit / cap on the donations political parties can receive from corporations.
In a nut-shell, this essay discussed the problems Australia will face in the near future along with the ways to tackle these problems. The millenials of today need to fight for a sustainable future by taking relevant steps in the present.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1301369863 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88863007509 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.0808840311 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248868965897 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761802073428 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882592206408 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147807564566 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105217350082 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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