More and more people are now moving away from an agricultural background to cities for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solution you can offer?
Statistic shows clearly that the rate of rural-urban immigration has been exceedingly increasing particularly in recent years. This phenomenon has its obvious results like increase the rate of unemployment in cities and make a tough condition of lives. From my perspective, there are some steps that government can take to slow down this trend.
Moving from rural area to cities has it various side effects. The first and for the most, huge number of immigrants to urban areas would cause them lack of job opportunities. Each city has a limited job vacancy that can not lived up with new inhabitant’s expectations. It is worthwhile to say that rural-urban immigrants usually have experience in farming so that they are not competence for some jobs such as white-collar jobs or managing positions. Besides, new inhabitants of the city is always have a struggle to meet end every month due to expensive expenses of urban life. Firstly, there is always a shortage of affordable housing so they would be posed a major obstacle in accommodating. Secondly, because of the hordes of the cities, hygiene comes at a huge cost. For example, due to a deficit in refined water, drinking water is very expensive. So, they will face a major problem to covering the costs.
Fortunately, there are some solutions to prevent from sharply increasing of urbanization. It is one of the social obligations of government to allocate more found in order to equip rural areas with proper amenities and provide the platform for progress. By this approach dishearten will be eradicated from youngsters of villages and they will be passion for staying their home area. From my experience, my father always is complaining about his teenage that they didn’t have any professional field for their soccer train. Moreover, providing more and more job opportunities would help in diminishing rural- urban immigration. Government should help rural inhabitant to establish their local business by donating money or affording mortgage. It can arouse the to strive more. The more local businesses are blooming, the more job vacancies are available.
In conclusion, more willing of people to immigrate from village has its related ramifications like increasing jobless status and higher cost of living in urban areas. Although this inclination cannot be omitted in near future but it can be mitigated by some steps such as facilitating the progress situations and also providing more job opportunities for these susceptible areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
..., new inhabitants of the city is always have a struggle to meet end every month due ...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...ome area. From my experience, my father always is complaining about his teenage that they...
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Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to mortgage'
Suggestion: to mortgage
...business by donating money or affording mortgage. It can arouse the to strive more. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22885572139 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98973102829 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569651741294 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.891141887 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236084021406 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713906427026 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561460317894 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14763208929 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649966298372 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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