Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, However, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although, many people believe that education of boys and girls in same sex school is beneficial. While, other advocate that enrollment in co-education is more advantageous. However, in my opinion I believe that confidence that is earned during study in mixed school is superior.
One the one hand, it is sometimes thought that mixed school education provides more benefits and I agree. Study in mixed gender is a great source of personality development. In other words, boys and girls in same institute can interact and talk with each other. For instance, males and females in Western countries have been studying and working together in a healthy environment since ages. Thus, they are able to communicate and deliver their ideas in an effective way.
On the other hand, many advocates that, it is better if education of children should be done in segregated schools because opposite gender attracts each other and when they get free hand it would eventually lead to indulging in several unethical activities. For example, in many underdeveloped countries eve teasing is observed which is humiliating and not acceptable at any cost. It results in shattering of women’s confidence which is why many people are against co-education.
In conclusion, people may vary in their opinion whether segregated or mixed education for boys and girls is more advantageous. I consider that co-education is helping in personality development of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...girls in same sex school is beneficial. While, other advocate that enrollment in co-e...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to communicate and deliver their ideas in an effective way. On the other hand, many advocates...
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Suggestion:
...eliver their ideas in an effective way. On the other hand, many advocates that, ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...es. For example, in many underdeveloped countries eve teasing is observed which is humili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33043478261 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00961282829 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5790668375 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3076923077 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217120001622 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794792160885 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832962297166 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156625061062 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873322036235 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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