Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The men and women are the integral part of our society and get them educated is more crucial now a days. While one group of people think that it is good to teach both genders in different institutions, another group believe we can get more advantages by getting them educated under same roof. In this essay, I will put a light on these different thoughts and give my opinion.
First of all, students who are learning in a homogeneous school or university are less confident. Why they is this so? Because they cannot communicate to their opposite gender. Lack of confidence means you cannot step forward in your future since you are not eligible to make understand others of your opinion and in doing so you are the only killer of your career. Secondly, varied sexuality attract one another. First example, if the boys and girls don’t have a platform to understand each other than they in order to know each other better find other ways and waste their crucial time of studying.
Heterogeneous studying environment promotes harmony among Male and female students and they get to know each other in better ways. However, there is a chance of distracting from their original goal but we can manage it by specify some rules. Co- education give the chance to commingle both genders and preparing them for future where everyone have to meet for their career opportunities to others.
To sum up, both environment have some drawbacks as well as positive impact so, it doesn’t matter in what environment do you study. You can improve yourself in future by interacting with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87084870849 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60629999469 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3437064742 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174256707485 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450166389651 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357902175546 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915871418064 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279787145665 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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