Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's time girls are as much capable as boys in any aspect whether it would be sports, intelligence or craftsmanship. Still, some people would argue that the former should not be taught together in same school. In this essay we will look on both side of the view along with my stand on why I believe it is important to have both sexes study at same place.
To begin with, if boys and girls are did taught in separate school there would be major drawbacks. Firstly, the children will never learn about gender equality, today when there are rigorous law made to equalize pay-grade of both men and women, so kids need to understand its importance. Secondly, they would have no respect for females as they had not got any chance to interact or spend time with them. In addition, small boys raised in boys school mostly have trouble empathy towards women as they are not emotionally matured in their teenage.
Hence, for all above drawbacks I oppose the notion of having separate school.
On the contrary, having children study in same institution will bring all in same level of playing field. To illustrate, nowadays there is no difference between the two sexes, it is more about the caliber and capability of an individual. Furthermore, in India government has program such as "Beti bachao, Beti Padhao" which means To save girl and educate girls. So, if such kind on initiatives can also apply elsewhere in the world it will be lessen the salary gap to substantial level between men and women. Therefore, I support the notion of having co-ed education system as much as possible.
In conclusion, education is paramount importance for any person regardless of sexes. The benefits far extend than any drawbacks for having boys and girls studying together and I opine this view completely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
...o begin with, if boys and girls are did taught in separate school there would be major...
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Line 11, column 276, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'programed', 'programmed'.
Suggestion: programed; programmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89935064935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6007121772 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8246807827 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158574151303 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535487114679 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477078349836 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881482874859 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426690835363 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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