Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do a different kind of jobs. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by a significant number of individuals that alteration in career is more appropriate for a candidate and at least one change should be taken during professional life. I completely agree with the idea and believe that this will increasing the learning of an individual and enhance interest in professional life.
To begin with, change in career at once plays a vital role to bring back the energy in monotonous life. Mostly every profession has a saturation stage, in which the individuals feels bore and dull with their daily routine and repetition of work. Therefore people should try the approach of changing career at once, it will teach them many things which they have not learnt from their previous profession and creates interest in daily activities. Hence, change in professional career is vital to make the life bright and colorful.
Similarly, joining another field in career makes the person multi-skilled and advanced in this competitive world. Working with other field will provide the opportunity to add up the experience and talent level. For example, various organizations prefer to interchange their employees in different departments to make them competitive and strong candidate for higher roles, such as, candidate having knowledge of production and quality is a strong candidate for research and development department of company. Hence, people should change their career at least once if possible to build their career profile.
To conclude, I agree that professionals should modify their career path at once in life due to the reasons mentioned in above paragraphs. In future, as the competition is growing, the multi-talented people will be in more demand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: increase
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
... reasons mentioned in above paragraphs. In future, as the competition is growing, the mul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, at least, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29259259259 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91759009485 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5967267762 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312762675216 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119128439228 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981698306946 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194645656425 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344699872839 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.