Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Ideally people find inspiration from those who are indulge in activities they like. Sportsmen and sportswomen influence a great number of people especially with their actions and behaviour. I have outlined
various points pertaining to my disgareement with professional sportsmen and sportswomen can misbehave on or off the field as long as they are playing well.
Firstly sports is watched worldwide with people being influenced by the players behaviour. Secondly appropriatly channelizing negative energy by players influenses young minds waching them. Thirdly misbehaving players stakes
their repuation along with their country, thereby facing consequence. For example a few year back my friend was frestrated and was indulged in distroying objects near him as a result of his favorate player had been
banned for months without realising that he too is acting the same.
Many players have started charity for children in need, which has influenced people to donate for a couse. Similarly Players changing lifepartner after a few years of marriage, this could be a neagtive influence on
people. Dispite countless positive actions indulged by players, one wrong action can influence people and lead them astray.Players have a moral obligation to guide their followers through their actions. For instance Virath Kholi
has found ways to channelise preasure during match, is helping children in need and also has married the woned he fell in love with.
To summerise Professional sports players have a moral obligation to follow the path in which is correct and that their actions influences countless people. Playing well is not an excuse for them to misbehave as their intregreaty
is at stake and so is their countries reputation.
- Firstly according to contemporary ages modern cultures are been changed and been similar when compared to the past we find more positive development than negative development furthermore disadvantage are also considered to be worth it 77
- many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves some people think that this is a good thing while others think that it has disadvantages discuss both views and give your own opinion 55
- Living in a country where you have to sepak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problem to waht extend to you agree or disagress 77
- Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character However sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior If sprting events can lead t 77
- many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves some people think that this is a good thing while others think that it has disadvantages discuss both views and give your own opinion 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ally people find inspiration from those who are indulge in activities they like. Sports...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
...ple find inspiration from those who are indulge in activities they like. Sportsmen and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r actions and behaviour. I have outlined various points pertaining to my disgaree...
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...ield as long as they are playing well. Firstly sports is watched worldwide with...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...ide with people being influenced by the players behaviour. Secondly appropriatly channe...
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...them. Thirdly misbehaving players stakes their repuation along with their country...
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...a result of his favorate player had been banned for months without realising that...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...nfluenced people to donate for a couse. Similarly Players changing lifepartner after a fe...
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...e, this could be a neagtive influence on people. Dispite countless positive actio...
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Suggestion: Players
...n influence people and lead them astray.Players have a moral obligation to guide their ...
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...their actions. For instance Virath Kholi has found ways to channelise preasure du...
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...r them to misbehave as their intregreaty is at stake and so is their countries re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47970479705 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85010385878 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5048028418 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224242249668 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861244085021 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907892530556 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969894140554 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109578607259 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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