Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.
Recently, showing other countries’ movies or TV programmes has become a frequent subject of debate. While there is a tendency for showing the external cinema products, some people believe that this issue should be domestic. Despite the fact that internal TV programs or movies are considered as the first priority to watch, it is also true to say that foreign products are associated with several benefits.
To begin with, it should be noted that cinema and TV are two of the most important measures to educate people and increase the public awareness about a variety of subjects including history, culture, political decisions, and new sciences. As well, in most societies, TV is considered as the main way to entertain people. Obviously, people benefits from watching TV programs and movies significantly. Watching all domestic TV series or films might result in some kind of isolation, which means people would never know about history, for instance, of other countries.
On the other hand, in today’s world, living in a global village required to interact with other countries. Cutting-edge technological advancements facilitate the relationship between people from all around the world. Going overseas to study or work, as an illustrative instance, is growing beyond recognition recently. As mentioned before, due to the educational role of TV and cinema, watching foreign products is an effective way to increase individual’s knowledge about other countries. This result in more information before choosing an international university or company. Further, foreign movies are an easy way to learn about higher living standards. For example, those citizen of less developed countries, who are less likely to travel to developed countries, are able to learn about more civilized behaviors.
In conclusion, all mentioned points lead to a concrete foundation which indicates that although domestic movies or TV programs are able to enrich people’s knowledge, the role of foreign products is inevitable. Given this situation, it seems all governments should allocate a specific budget to import these kinds of products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 672, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this citizen' or 'those citizens'?
Suggestion: this citizen; those citizens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50151975684 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96057994023 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1809334047 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232935408997 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757308412111 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051500522886 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150292267802 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453246253555 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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