Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that playing sports in a team has a lot more benefit while others believe that solo sport is more advantageous. In my opinion, both types of sports bring equal advantages.
On one hand, playing sport in a team brings in the team spirit where each team mate is trying to accomplish similar goal. The reliability on each other is at peak and which is also very important to keep the team together. Being in a team, limits your independence however it proves to be beneficial. For example in soccer, every team has their own approach on how to achieve goal against their rivalry team. Being in team also helps you in accomplishing your goal where whole team reaches out to attain one goal. For example, in soccer again where even if the ball is with one of team member, he will sacrifice and pass it on to other since chances of scoring a goal are higher with the other team member. This shows how dependency can help in achieving similar goal selflessly.
On the other hand, solo sport got its own benefits. It can limit your dependency to others and liberate you. Therefore, you can accomplish your goal singlehandedly. The player has much more freedom in order to experiment with strategies whereas in a team you have to follow the previously agreed plan. For example in tennis, player bears sole responsibility of accomplishing the goal and also can change his strategies depending upon his rival. Therefore, such players have sense of satisfaction.
In conclusion, every type of sport has its own merits in developing player’s personality. It solely depends upon player’s personality which one he or she wants to play.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86219081272 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80534216924 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544169611307 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3572714986 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9411764706 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128466615887 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533714217699 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596032961166 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113831258512 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860765083998 0.056905535591 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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