Some people believe that visiting far places helps in learning various cultures. Whereas others argue , a lot of information can be accessed from various forms of print and digital media makes it unnecessary. In my opinion, traveling other places has multifold advantages, which makes it a better option .
When people travel far places, they spend money for lodging, roaming & eating local foods. As a result natives get enormous benefits in the form of financial upraising and more opportunities for quality jobs. For instance my home town, Amritsar, is a tourist hub due to its world famous historical importance. During last few decades a skyrocketing jump in number of visitors has brought up various restaurants, hotels and malls to this historical city. As a result, a lot of young people have been able to get good quality jobs of their choice. Local inhabitants are enjoying better life due to improved infrastructure in the city ,as local government has invested a lot of funds in it recently. That is one reason that makes traveling a better alternative than getting information from books or internet.
Furthermore, when people travel abroad , they not only learn a different culture from first hand information , but also make new friends. This happened with me when a couple from Canda visited to India few years back. They stayed with us in a tourist destination in India. During their stay they grabbed deep knowledge about indian rituals, culure & festivals. Eversince then they are now family friends with me and my family. That is another huge advantage of visiting an unknown destination,as people discover cultures and new friends .
To conclude, traveling is always positive not only for traveller, but for local inhabitants too. Better opportunities to explore new relationships makes it a fruitful viewpoint.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, whereas, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24149659864 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88084888441 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636054421769 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8339904337 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6111111111 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183845636091 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523582814238 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544078888464 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111482373831 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787715003128 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.