Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every five years.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
These days a vast number of vehicles drive around the cities. This leads to a great deal of problems on the roads. To deal with them some police officers advocate that resiting driving test once in five years should be mandatory. In this essay, I will consider both positive and negatives sides of this approach.
Let us begin with the benefits of this solution. First of all, it can encourage drivers to review traffic rules regularly. People tend to forget regulations on the road as time passes so they frequently have a car accident. They would not have such situations if they had the opportunity to look through the rules on a regular basis. Therefore, retaking the mandatory driving test once in five years supposedly helps them to avoid accidents. Secondly, it can allow drivers to learn about updates in time. For example, many drivers in Kazakhstan are not aware of alterations in traffic regulations, which happen once in a while, and disagree with fines regarding these changes. However, this new approach in testing will seemingly help avoid such confrontations between drivers and police officers. Thereby, after analyzing these advantages, it is clear that resiting driving test makes sound sense.
Nevertheless, some politicians claim that this innovative approach has many drawbacks. To begin with, it will be an extra burden on the country budget. For instance, in Kazakhstan the current driving test occurs every ten years and perfectly fits in the budget, but if the new approach passes in the Parliament, they will have to seek money at the expense of other aspects of life. Consequently, it will definitely create a resentment in society. Another disadvantage is that it can result in unnecessary inconvenience. This approach will lead to a loss in income, since drivers will have to take some unpaid weeks off work to prepare and resit the test every five years. Moreover, their employers will also experience discomfort every five years, because they will have to seek for a replacement while the worker is not at work due to this compulsory driving test. Hence, after considering all these disadvantages, it is evident that this approach also pose many problems.
In conclusion, although taking a driving every five years on the obligatory basis has plenty of advantages, it also has many drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09399477807 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76045181319 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548302872063 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2579008217 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6818181818 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282135782016 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717581539938 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063557086178 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168735679981 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370782095048 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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