Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
There are various types of animals in the world, some are carnivores are flesh-eating animals and herbivores are plant-eating animals, which live together with us. but when it comes to pets is good for children, people hold conflicting views. In my mind, pets give help and security to children.
children definitely have more advantages than being alone. The primary advantage of children is that it gives support in many ways. there are many people around the globe they believe that pets give to support their loved one. For example, when a child falls in a swimming pool the dogs help him and in many ways when they go out for the fulfillment of the need.
Another advantage of pets is that monitoring our children and family members. We all agree that dogs are more conscious that it doesn’t allow entering any unknowing persons. In this way, it helps our family and children's.
I admit that pets are dangerous and unhealthy. some pets are harmful and unhealthy. For example, street dogs are harmful. Because they have not been given the proper training and maintenance. So, I believe that with the help of quality training it can be acceptable. Based on this point, pets are good children.
In summary, pets are dangerous and unhealthy, but pets aid and support our family members. I am convinced that pets are good for our children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61739130435 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.535256127 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7535220988 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7777777778 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236266685681 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829816591853 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550986044665 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138204656262 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501794243822 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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