Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believed that wealthy people could bring various opportunities to help others. Personally, I partly agree with this view.
On the one hand, it is understandable why many people think that rich people can contribute their money to help other people. Their principal reason for this is that being wealthy can give them the money and the ability to do things that an average person cannot do. Take Bill Gate, for example, a well-known billionaire can easily support the education and living standard of orphan children. This also can erase the percentage of illiteracy among younger generations in the future. Poor children with the support of rich people are allowed to learn at school without worrying about financial problems that can occur in the future.
On the other hand, normal citizens can also devote themselves to saving other lives. Although a lot of great things cannot be done or achieved, efforts can still be made to brighten others’ lives. In fact, the act of kindness sometimes does not need to involve financial conditions as a small action can contribute to a bigger purpose. Take charity programs for the elderly, for example, those are a series of small actions coming from many people across countries that can contribute to building a new healthcare center for the elderly people. As a result, these actions can sometimes motivate many suffering individuals to overcome their personal difficulties or even prevent a potential crime rate from happening.
In conclusion, there are sufficient grounds to believe that wealthy people offer chances to save people's lives by contributing their money to society. However, I believe that not only a billionaire but also an average person can contribute their effort to help others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18531468531 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66135370819 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5033581626 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225817634976 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836284375732 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077903726457 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153789815755 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057522093612 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.