Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Music is quite popular since ancient era. It helps to enrich the soul as well as relax the mind. Some people concerned that community get benefit from music while others think that it is only a source of amusement. The essay will discuss both sides of arguments in detail and provide evidence, how it contributes towards society.
Nowadays, Apart from academic qualifications, people are more interested to build up their career in another field. Music is one of them, as several platforms are available for the people who are willing to accentuate their talent in the area. For instance, Indian Idol and Rising star are quite popular shows that assist people to explore themselves and give inspiration to follow their path. Furthermore, various people have contributed their voice for the benefit of society that results in an outstanding image of the country in the world. For example, Priyanka Chopra, the famous Bollywood actress stepped in Hollywood as a singer, she did not only represent herself but our nation as well.
Conversely, since the traditional era, music is considered as a great source of entertainment as healing music helps to release the stress and regain the energy to continue the work as before. Today's many people listen to music, especially while travelling as it enables to refresh the mind. Also, music is all the rage for social gathering. Indeed, the celebration seems imperfect in the absence of it. For example, clubs, bars and wave parties cannot be imagined without music.
To recapitulate, music can be seen in the form of entertainment since ancient times whereas, nowadays the visibility of it is not only limited to amusement but extend to build-up the career in the area and contribute towards community. I believe, a plethora of opportunities are available in the direction to prove oneself and to be a model role for society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eself and to be a model role for society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05806451613 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74152558606 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5242661277 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215704077135 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592989572374 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489989998053 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123100409486 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494578428408 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.