Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers. Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers. Discuss both opinion and give your own opinion.
Most people believe that technology has enhanced the lives of employees whereas other people believe that it's more harmful than productive.In this essay, I put lights on both beneficial and detrimental viewpoints of advanced machinery which impacts the lifestyle of the workers.
On the other hand, technological advancement has brought dramatic changes in the style of working and promotes the quality of life of the working class. Automation has assisted to improve the quality of products in less time and without it and hard work. For example, after the industrial revolution, the improvisation in machinery brings money in the pockets of workers and the wealthy lifestyle of the labour class.Moreover, the biggest relief to the industrial sector is safety of an individual's work in hazardous places and development of medical technology which leads to decrease in fatal injuries working in heavy industries.
On the other hand, where there is a rapid growth in machines would also give setback to traditional or handmade industry. Consequently, most workers related to this industry may lose their livelihood. Examples could be seen, when Britishers introduced machines in the cotton industry, almost cotton weavers or handicrafts lost their traditional business in cotton clothes.Furthermore, machinery has also given people easy access to most things. As a result,people are more prone to health ailments and an unhealthy lifestyle.For illustration, most multinational company's employees have been sitting jobs on computers all day, which give eyesight problems as well as body posture dysfunction.
Overall, it seems advisable that technology should be used in a reasonable manner where it can be used in a sustainable way not in an excessive way which may be harmful to the environment. Finally, where technology is a boon is also a curse for mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46896551724 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18941471601 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.361208046 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.6 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186952050063 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667709364796 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046110551057 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106244406905 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541758220219 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.