Some people think that newspapers are the best media to learn and get information from, while others believe that the Internet is a better source.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few men and women deem that news can be best learnt and information can be gotten from tabloids, while others think a better source of news is the cyberspace. Although, newspapers are published in regional languages and they are cheaper, I believe that the Internet is the best resource because of up-to-date information as well as videos related to news can be seen on it.
On the one hand, newspapers are published in numerous languages which could be the reason why some people prefer to read it, whereas in the hyperspace, most of the information are rendered in English only. To exemplify, majority of geriatric people like to read newspapers because of their illiteracy in English language. In addition to that, newspapers are considered as the cheapest medium of news publication; however, news can only be read on the Internet with the assistance of technological gizmos such as, mobile phones and computers which require a lot of money to procure these devices. Nevertheless, I deem that myriad of benefits, one could get by acquiring information from the cyberspace.
On the other hand, information should be gotten from the Internet because people can find latest happenings on it, though in case of newspapers, it is not feasible. Secondly, spectrum of videos can be watched on the cyberspace regarding any information or news; however, newspaper provide only descriptive information with some photographs only. For example, newspapers can solely describe what has happened, but it could be seen on the hyperspace which may be more effective. Thirdly, free of cost news can be read or seen on the Internet because it does not require any additional charges to surf them. Therefore, cyberspace is a better source of getting news.
By agglomerating above mentioned factors, it is concluded that although, newspapers facilitate an individual to get news in their native language and less expensive, I bolster the notion of searching information and news from the Internet due to up-to-date knowledge as well as facility to watch videos. Furthermore, it is recommended that people should prefer the way of getting information as per the circumstances.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the latest'.
Suggestion: find the latest
...en from the Internet because people can find latest happenings on it, though in case of new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19714285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01696022175 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494285714286 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8643420418 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.923076923 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0769230769 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21416700467 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911322501023 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402844494785 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147936994801 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222412674221 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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