Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Globalization have opened multiple employment prospects across a globe for an individual.Seen in this light,many people tend to switch jobs on timely basis for their blooming future. However, some argue that traditional approach of employer loyalty should be opted for job security reasons.This essay agrees that job change is prerequisite to annex your skills horizon.This essay will discuss both points of view.
The most prominent reason in the support of my view is that job change promotes the versatility in employees leading them to adapt better to change of the working environments in multinational companies, in addition to, inflating their curriculum vitae with global exposure in their respective fields. An example to this, companies prefer the employees with multi-companies working experience in their senior hierarchy in order to minimize the risk association with decision making abilities. Moreover, job change facilitates hefty increase in salaries comparative to working in the same company for a long time.To exemplify, Recent survey conducted in the UK revealed that job switchers earn 40 percent more in comparison to same job workers in their lifetime career.
On the other side, same job in long run offers more financial security, therefore adding to the sense of belongingness with a particular company.Consequently lead an individual to perfectionist in their job profile improvising their efficiency gradually.An example to this, people tend to be role models or value of example for young aspirants who look forward to them as their mentors in on job training exercises in a company.Furthermore company tend to provide loyalty bonus and shareholding opportunities as a reward in return of their services.
To sum up, it can be concluded based in aforementioned facts that although individualistic choices based on their preferences are solely responsible for either option as a career orientation, yet job changes thrive for better enrichment of peoples abilities through mutual learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6038961039 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33145362191 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.072647861 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.571428571 106.682146367 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279957120495 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129106236003 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613576254554 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162601432451 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544415022747 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.71 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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