Some people think that one of the ways to solve environmental problem is to increase price of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.
Nowadays, environmental crisis as a result of fuel combustion by cars and other vehicles are on the rise. This has given rise to the fervid question ' can an increase in price of gasoline for cars and other vehicle really mitigate this problem'?. Certain individuals opine that one way to ameliorate environmental issue is to hike price of premium motor spirit. Personally, I totally cannot give credence to the advocates of that school of thought.
Undoubtedly, environmental problem caused by combustion of fuel by cars and other vehicles are much but I totally cannot agree that to mitigate it, price of gasoline should be hiked due to the following reasons. First and foremost, it will lead to an increase in goods and services. If fuel price are increased, it would result to hardship due to increase in goods and services of transportation cost. For example, in 2018, Nigeria gasoline price rose to 187 per litre and this caused an inflation on goods and services. In general, a rise in petrol price will increase prices of goods and services.
Consequently, it will increase poverty due to inflation cause by fuel price hike. To elucidate, when there is an inflation on prices of goods and services, people cannot be able to afford their basic needs such as food and shelter. For instance, in Venezuela poverty rate has surged to 39% due to petrol pump price hike. Unless there is price reduction of premium motor spirit in Venezuela, her poverty rate will not reduce. On the whole, when gasoline for cars and other vehicles surges, poverty rate also increases.
To recapitulate, petrol and other fuels utilized by vehicles have caused environmental menace however, an increase in price is not the way to mitigate this problem because it will lead to inflation in price of goods and services and poverty. I reiterate my stand that I totally do nt believe in that school thought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, so, for example, for instance, in general, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72592118711 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451410658307 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1324181827 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276680429229 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100579356388 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596241360332 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193518693175 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386526905572 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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