Some people think that the only way to judge someones success in business is my the amount of money they make. Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?
People are divided in their opinion regarding ways to measure ones success .This has given rise to the fervid question 'can success in business be measured'?. Certain individuals believe that money is the only way to determine whether one is successful in business. In this essay I will discuss how money is not a true measure of a booming business more so, proffer other ways prosperous businesses can be measured.
Apparently, money is important in business ventures but it is not a true measure of a successful business. This is because money loses value. To illustrate, most fait currencies cannot stand the taste of time due to different economic policies and unstable government. For example, in 2013 in Nigeria, Mr Danta a successful business mogul once had 20 million naira worth 100,000 dollars stored in the bank but today the value has depreciated to 50,000 dollar. If he had know that fiscal policies could affect his stored money, he would have invested it. On the whole, money loses value and should be used as measure of a successful business.
Conversely, there a plethora of ways to measure a prosperous business however, there are two major ways to do such. First and foremost, investment in real estate. This is one of the most prominent way to determine a successful entrepreneur because real estate investment increases over time. For instance, a duplex in Banana island that is worth 100 million in 2018 now worths 150 million. So its evident that such is a good investment. Secondly, booming business can be determined by the amount of reputable companies shares it have. To elucidate, most companies sell shares to the public which makes them part owners of the business. So it's imperative to say that the more shares one could by from the different companies the richer and successful he or she becomes. Unless an entrepreneur has acquired enough companies shares, he or she is not to be considered successful. All in all, investment in real estate and reputable company shares acquisition are the main true indicator of successful business.
To recapitulate, the opinions of people varies on the determinants of booming business. Nonetheless, money is not a true measure of a successful business, investment in real estate and in company shares are other ways successes in business can be measured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, conversely, first, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02583979328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84935718037 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501291989664 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5571990213 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.619047619 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431763595955 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132304141921 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125735375101 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317999063628 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105252640837 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.