To give a good person to the society, guardians should give good moral values to their children. This is the view of few individuals. Where is others have different view on on children. They think that to educate children, send them to the school. My views on both points will explored further.
The first view is begin with the parents, parents are the first teacher of their children. When the baby was born, parents were the only people who teach their children to speak to walk and to run. When the children grown up they teach good moral values. The children behave to the others and in the outer world according to the the environment of their house. Moreover, if parents were educated then they give a personal attention to their kid's education. Small all but the important things like manage the time and money, how to behave with elders children are are learnt only from their parents. Moreover, the tradition and culture is carried to the children only by the parents.
On the other hand, school is the place where learners are getting and academic knowledge. And that academic knowledge helps to get a good job ab or implement a business. In India the degree and certificate is more important. on the basis of good academic degree, person can get a salary and their position in a job. In addition to this point, few individuals believe that the cleverness of pupil is decided from his result of the school exam.
To sum up the whole essay, parents are making a person well mannered and schools are giving a knowledge about to survive lives and the betterment of the nation. According to my view both the parents and the teachers of the school are equally responsible to giving a good citizen to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...gree and certificate is more important. on the basis of good academic degree, pers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4127072988 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2582441407 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9473684211 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293458999792 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899456180313 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494638109113 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180471341745 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660027956904 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.