Advertise is the key feature to establish a successful business. People are watching too many advertisements around them because of increasing competition among multiple companies. Customers are influenced positively and also facing negative effects. There are many ways to solve those problems. And all my points are mentioned in further paragraphs.
To begin with the positive side, companies spread their product and gain more customers through advertisement. Increasing competition between companies is beneficial for customers, because product owners are giving more offers and discounts from their companies. In short, without advertisement they cannot get more buyers. Moreover, customers can be aware of good thoughts and products. For instance, Nike right under all ads, that they are making their product from Marine plastic waste. Due to this kind of promotion individuals can be aware of two points in one advertisement.
On the other side, it has some negative impacts from which consumers should not be influenced by. To sell their products and to attract more buyers, companies presenting their ads by high-profile actors and models. People are following their favourite celebrity and they buy products by watching their glowing face and perfect shape of body. Additionally, Agencies are also using cartoon characters, bright and eye-catching colours and offer free products in their ad campaign to attract children. And children can easily mislead by these ads.
As a solution government should take some steps, such as authorities should put restrictions on such products to advertise which can be injurious for human health. like tobacco, cigarette and nicotine. Moreover, influencers should not remote such products just for few money. Another practical solution which government can put in action, that all the ingredients and after effects of that product should I mention in in promotion. People can also take part to solve this problem by aware their children about the advantages and disadvantages of products which children are watching frequently in ad films.
To conclude, in my opinion, people should be influenced by such good products and campaigns. Because it has an important part in the growth of country's economy. Few problems are there of the advertisement but, can be solved by taking such steps.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...hich can be injurious for human health. like tobacco, cigarette and nicotine. Moreov...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...hould not remote such products just for few money. Another practical solution which...
^^^
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little money'.
Suggestion: little money
...hould not remote such products just for few money. Another practical solution which gover...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ffects of that product should I mention in in promotion. People can also take part to...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed by such good products and campaigns. Because it has an important part in the growth ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, for instance, in short, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49584487535 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89109898784 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540166204986 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1543679304 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0416666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166359558611 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050392250927 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423259719952 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101741082316 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250325741314 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...hich can be injurious for human health. like tobacco, cigarette and nicotine. Moreov...
^^^^
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...hould not remote such products just for few money. Another practical solution which...
^^^
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little money'.
Suggestion: little money
...hould not remote such products just for few money. Another practical solution which gover...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ffects of that product should I mention in in promotion. People can also take part to...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed by such good products and campaigns. Because it has an important part in the growth ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, for instance, in short, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49584487535 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89109898784 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540166204986 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1543679304 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0416666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166359558611 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050392250927 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423259719952 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101741082316 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250325741314 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.