Life values play really an important role in making a person good citizen in the community. There are conflicting views about whether imparting social skills is a responsibilty of guardians or school. This essay will discuss both the views and explain why i think parents should be held prime responsible for cultivating these skills.
On the one hand, many people assert that parents play a crucial role in upbringing of a child because most of the time they spent with their family. Parents are considered the first teacher for every child because they mostly learn from them. They observe them, analyse them and get inspired by them. So, it is really important to depict the same nature in front of youngsters the way you want them to behave. For instance, if guadians want their children to respect them then they should set an example by respecting their own parents. Parents are held responsible for inappropriate behaviour of children, and hence nurturer can teach to co-operate with others. Nowadays, children, living in neutral families tend loose their temper easily and act weird when in public. Hence, in these situations, parents should teach these habits to their little ones.
On the other hand, Teachers play a pivotal role in shaping the future of all the children. Nowadays, children spend alot of their time in schools as both the parents might be working. Hence, all the control over learning is held with schools only because this is the right place to educate students, so they should include all these activities in their course structure. In addition, it has been observed that in comparison to parents, children are more afraid of teachers and they tend to listen to them obediently resulting a good future for them. Hence, teachers can show the right direction in order to become a responsible person.
To conclude, althought educators can play an eminent role in social life, parents are the one who are responsible for their child's behaviour and upbringing.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... discuss both the views and explain why i think parents should be held prime resp...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them then they should set an example by respecting their own parents. Parents ar...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
... children, and hence nurturer can teach to co-operate with others. Nowadays, children, living...
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Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ildren, living in neutral families tend loose their temper easily and act weird when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, really, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02719033233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53850873847 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3027433406 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21511175443 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714445817881 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668633146047 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132400948627 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719471154293 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... discuss both the views and explain why i think parents should be held prime resp...
^
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them then they should set an example by respecting their own parents. Parents ar...
^^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
... children, and hence nurturer can teach to co-operate with others. Nowadays, children, living...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ildren, living in neutral families tend loose their temper easily and act weird when ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, really, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02719033233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53850873847 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3027433406 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21511175443 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714445817881 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668633146047 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132400948627 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719471154293 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.