Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion?
There is a controversial issue about the size of individual contribution to the community. Some social workers state that tax payment is the right amount, while some economists say that each citizen should devote more. In this essay, I will consider both points of view and agree with the idea that more support is necessary.
Let us start with reasons why some social workers argue that the money that people pay to the government as tax is the adequate deduction. The first reason is that people are overly busy to do more for community. Apart from both household duties and child rearing, people mostly have to work full-time jobs to lead a comfortable lifestyle, but if they are obliged to do more than paying taxes, they will become unbearably exhausted. Another reason is that the government attempts to hide its ineffectiveness through additional involvement of citizens. Many authorities do social work carelessly, which often results in faults, but they frequently prevent them from exposure and later ask the public for help. Therefore, it is irrational for officials to involve citizens in extra social work.
However, some economists claim that residents should do more for the community. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, the whole society can solve all chronic problems in the country. The government alone cannot address all social obstacles, as it is restricted in resources, but with the help of citizens, it can achieve more results. Secondly, responsible countrymen tend to behave better. People, who contribute more to society, are more likely to care for the cleanliness and tidiness of streets, since they know the value for the public order. Therefore, apart from paying taxes, it is reasonable for citizens to take more social commitments.
In conclusion, even though some economists propagate that, besides tax payment, citizens should take more social responsibilities, I think that the payment is the best contribution that citizens can do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.278125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8209439217 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0370537881 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245824308009 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743599997559 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601307338693 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161969960439 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329363275335 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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