Some people think that people who are travelling to a different culture than they should adapt The local culture and the practises.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
For decade, the world has become a global village as most of the countries have come to espouse the open trade model. A Statement has been put forward that masses need to imbibe native rituals and cultural practices when they go for voyage. Here, I concur with the given statement to great extent and will emphasise my supporting views in the upcoming paragraphs.
As far as my views are concerned multifarious grounds can be presented foremost regarding my point of view. To elaborate this, for an individual, who is commuting somewhere, it would be facile to be a part of any group and become easy for him or her to socialise rather than having a feeling of disparity of local practice especially the linguistic differences. Moreover, there might be great chances of indulging in verbal confabulation if the traveller behaves the same as the people of exploring site do and therefore, there would be a great opportunity to acquire more about the indigenous land where the person is going to travel.
Further,emphasising my notion, the second reason is broad sophisticated worldview and diversifies thoughts and values.There is no doubt, culture is a unique experience that can open doors to a deeper understanding of an unfamiliar place where people can grasp a new skill and also one would have a chance to know about oneself. Further more, it had been revealed by various observations that the harmony has been influencing since this phenomena is taking place. Hence,while expedition there if he or she became a bit to the people in the surrounding.
On the stark contrast, few grave repercussions are observed because of this as well. For instance, eroding of one’s own ethical values and culture practises which means that person after welcoming other’s habit and norms would become disintegrated from his or her own’s,in extreme case.Therefore,for the sake of this there is no need to replicate the culture of the other country.
Conclusively, there is no doubt that voyaging to new places and new culture is going to change the explorer in term of his way of thinking, acting and living as well as there will be a great reform in the individuals overall personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94864864865 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85168948936 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.548518907 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.846153846 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142117178143 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440003663493 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334693619311 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654830831587 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156090380726 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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