Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, every country is focusing on tree plantation in their territory. Some people think that it's very important to plant tree in cities and towns while other think that building houses to live in the cities and towns. According to me, tree plantation is more crucial than building shelters. In this essay, I will support my opinion with example.
Firstly, having more trees will protect your towns and cities from pollution. What i mean to say is that now a days, pollution is the biggest issue in this world. To overcome this problem tree plantation plays an important role. For example tree will improve our air quality by filtering the dust and dangerous particales such as carbon monoxide, ozone in the air.
Another reason is that it protects your state from flooding and erosion. For example, When a storm water comes it will penetrate into trees and goes in the ground. If we reduce the tree plantation and encourages building houses it will leads us to disasters such as floods, pollution, ozone layer destruction etc. We should Plant tress in or outside of every house in oder to protect our state.
On the other side of the arguments some people believe that we should focus on developing houses as the population increasing rapidly fast we should provide a lot of shelters.
In conclusion, some people think that planting trees is more important than providing shelters. I personally believe that we should focus more on plantation instead of building houses. Development should be on vertically and each building. Parking lots, roads and houses must contain trees to provide a better enviorment in our territory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...houses to live in the cities and towns. According to me, tree plantation is more crucial than b...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r towns and cities from pollution. What i mean to say is that now a days, polluti...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...m pollution. What i mean to say is that now a days, pollution is the biggest issue in this...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...llution. What i mean to say is that now a days, pollution is the biggest issue in this...
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Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... and encourages building houses it will leads us to disasters such as floods, polluti...
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Line 9, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ery house in oder to protect our state. On the other side of the arguments some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02919708029 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5438244194 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543795620438 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3451844587 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0588235294 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280781940326 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942800834704 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114292779375 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163147280571 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10598423535 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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