These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
A generation ago, plethora people had lived in the countryside instead of urban areas. However, a particular segment of society is moving towards urban settlement from villages in current scenario. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and give some solid solutions.
One of the main cause of the problem is that a huge amount of facilities has provided to metropolitan sides. For example, best hospitals, universities and entertainment places are available in urban community. Therefore, the rural people will exile towards populated areas. The solution is for the government to provide more facilities to villages, which would restrain them to go to metropolis sites.
Another problem is that quality of education in rural areas has declined. As a result, people from villages are migrating towards urban spaces. Take doctors as an example, the doctors graduated from urban universities has more experience and knowledge than the rural county students of the same field. The solution is that improve the quality of education in the rural areas and give them good teachers and give them opportunity to do practice in their field.
At third cause of the problem is that there is an a lot of opportunity of job in metropolis, which attracts the villagers to shift to the urban centers. The way forward could be to provide job opportunities in the rural-urabn site, which could make them satisfied and happy.
To sum up, people has transformed from rural to urban centers. Due to the reasons such as lack of facilities, poor quality of education and less job opportunities. This is a serious problem and unless we can provide better facilities, good quality of education and more job opportunities the urban enviroment will suffer. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the issue lies with government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
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Line 9, column 461, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ortunity to do practice in their field. At third cause of the problem is that th...
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Line 13, column 48, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: an; a
...d cause of the problem is that there is an a lot of opportunity of job in metropolis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, third, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88812895988 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0102217576 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9411764706 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185438387923 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062003157056 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523610177717 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104113469715 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409798646687 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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