Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few people think that politicians are more influential than scientist while some think the other way round. Both politicians are scientists are equally important for the progress, development and smooth functioning of any country in their own ways.
Politicians run the country, making decisions with regards to war & ensure safety of the citizens, for instance, the Pulwama attack early this year cite a good example of a politician, signing international treaties, emphasizing laws for improving the standard's of the country and to maintain peace and harmony, introducing new schemes in terms of housing, education, medical etc. which are significantly important for the growth of a country. It is highly imperative to have these norms and functionality intact. In the same way a scientist is undoubtedly as important as a politician. With the invention of bulbs, computers, automobiles, cell phones, several life saving vaccination and drugs, the missiles and bombs to be used in war has made the world a better place thus improving the living standards. With each passing day these inventions are getting more advanced and has phenomenally touched the lives of many in a positive manner. These inventions have made life at home & work easy. The world has certainly moved from caves to skyscrapers only because of the inventions made by the scientists.
With the above illustrations in my opinion I feel both politicians and scientists indisputably go hand in hand and are dependent on each other for a better and peaceful world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 921, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... phenomenally touched the lives of many in a positive manner. These inventions have made life at hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26530612245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0470529681 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.814314232 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179532501319 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699333745923 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628116633344 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143868202753 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502488701867 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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