Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most of crimes. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by many individuals that destitution is the primary reason for myriad crimes. In my opinion no doubt, poverty can be one of the reasons for committing a crime but there are certain other factors that contribute to an increase in crime are values inculcated and education.
To begin with, firstly the greedy and poor value system is the cause of the inclination to commit the crime. It is the sole responsibility of the parents to instill all the moral and ethical values in their children irrespective of the nature of surroundings and situations. It has been noticed that even rich people do commit crime but at higher level than poor people. This is just due to the characteristic installed by their guardians. In recent research, by “The Times” it came into the notice that 60 percent of the crime is done the people from eminent families, which in turn suggests that it is not the poverty but the ethics which is behind the crimes.
Furthermore, the lack of education is the other major factor which as a shot in the arm to ramp up the crime rate. The education is the basic right of the individual which privilege them to get adequate knowledge to get a good job. This succors them in fulfilling there the basic necessities of life like food, shelter, and clothes. One who is able to afford all these is less prone to criminal activities. In the survey, it has been noticed that 80 percent of people believe that education unfolds the right path of life and decrease the rate of crime.
To conclude, poverty can be a reason for various crimes but it is not alone responsible. Other factors such as moral and ethical values given by parents and inadequate education are also playing a major role in increasing crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 275, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...is succors them in fulfilling there the basic necessities of life like food, shelter, and clothes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71661237785 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63593801356 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2694094409 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183006878831 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588580795775 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576057384564 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114256350451 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373869680188 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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