You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you are selling the television.
Describe the television.
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Nidhi,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to tell you that I want to sell my television as I no more need it and you were asking about my television for a long time hence, I decide to let you know first about it.
As you know after the expiration of my grandfather and my family has to move to Amritsar near my maternal grandparent’s house as they are always worried about us. It will be very difficult for us to carry this television and LCD with us there.
The television only five years old and it is from SAMSUNG Company. It is still under the guaranty. There is no issue with the equipment. My father bought it as a gift for my grandparent’s room and later on, my brother bought an LCD for our lobby where we all sit to have our meals and small talks.
You were asking for the television when you visited last month then I just decided to tell you first that I want to sell this item before shifting. If you are interested in buying write me back when you will be available to have a look at it or if you are free this Sunday evening we can have dinner at my home.
Write me back about your plan.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ck about your plan. Yours Faithfully, Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, still, then, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23451327434 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36368103133 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1579396976 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6153846154 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313349717132 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113705089208 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865951738966 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165258668842 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106771441399 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.95 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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