Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by few that radio is more useful and effective for getting information about latest happening around the world, whereas others advocate that television is the more ideal for the above purpose. This essay will discuss on both the view points. but I assert that Television is more vital for getting updated news.
Considering the imperative believes of the individuals who opine that radio is most effective way for listening to new. Radio is very convenient to listen as the distraction is minimum unlike television in which visual images are displayed and person has to pay more attention. For instance, anybody can listen the radio while driving the car, whereas the same is not possible with television. Another reason is, affordability. Radio is very cheap and do not charge extra money, most of the radio channels are free, while monthly rent is paid by television viewers.
On the other hand many including me believe that television is more effective and interactive way to get latest updates, because one can watch the event along with listening. Television viewers can see the real pictures rather than merely listening to verbal news. To illustrate, when there is sunami in assam last year, all the updates are live telecasted in almost all the popular television channels. Apart from this, television provide more wider option to watch news because of the number of channels, which are broadcasted in television, while radio has fewer option.
In conclusion, although some people claim that radio is better option for news updates because of its price and potability, but I think that television is much better because of the its visual factor and variety of option to view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, while, apart from, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07829181495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59183231749 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.994757363 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345495944611 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110237792007 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668972885055 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203345089685 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575126527679 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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