Some people think that schools should reward students who have the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show progress. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The debate is about the reward should be given to the best students in the class or a progressive one. In the like manner, some believe that owner the best students who achieve the best academic results. While on the other hand prize should be given to the progressive students. In this essay, we will discuss the positive attributes of both ways in the following paragraphs.
Motivation is must for a progressive person to achieve their goals. Furthermore, it helps them to remain boosted and positive towards their ambition. Which indirectly make them competent and capable to produce better outputs as compare to their own previous records. School authorities should support and encourage them to achieve their target scores. There are ample of examples which have shown the motivation and encouragement helps an individual to achieve their band in a timely manner, such as very we renowned personality in India named Shahrukh Khan, an actor has itself said in his various interviews that encouragement from his mother was the prime part of his success.
While on the other hand, the top scorers are also equally important for the school and the society. Hence they are the one who decides the top limit for other students and sometimes act as a role model for an average student. The school should promote their names to government authorities for the rewards and owner. Therefore they remain ideal for the rest of the community and set an example for other students to stimulate for their set targets.
In brief, both the category of students are equally important for the society. In my opinion, the reward should be given to both types of students but the levels of the prize must be different.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... who achieve the best academic results. While on the other hand prize should be given...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion:
... levels of the prize must be different.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, in brief, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94791666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56855981393 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1647368112 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294802318376 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10718631341 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841975618891 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197328336819 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115908187524 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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