Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is a critical controversy related to the question of whether or not we should hold huge partities and celebrations. In this essay, I am going to outline the key features of both sides and then provide my personal view on the issue.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of offering parties considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that celebrations help people satisfy their needs to socialize with people around such as friends, relatives, colleagues and neighbors. It is also possible to say that these parties and celebrations benefit society. They mean to keep the traditions and culture within a community. One good illustration of this is the indispensibility of wedding or birthday parties. These are important events in a person's life and cannot be ignored.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact we spend too much for parties. People often have this opinion because many people seem to waste a lot on unnecessary stuff. Besides expenses for food and drink, huge amounts of money are spent on music, masters of ceremonies... A second point is that a few people tend to show off their wealth through parties. A particularly good example here is the wedding of children of some governmental officials. From newspapers, we learn that they have luxurious wedding riding first-class expensive super-cars or having royal dishes and wines.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that having parties and important celebrations is meaningful and should be maintained as long as we do not throw money through the window for pointless stuff.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-27 | vinhchau2020 | 73 | view |
| 2020-08-27 | vinhchau2020 | 84 | view |
- Children doing froup work vs working on their own 78
- Children doing froup work vs working on their own 56
- You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day However you think it needs some improvements Write a letter to the college magazine In your letter 1 Explain what you like about the cafeteria 2 Say what is wrong with it 3 Suggest how it could be 87
- Eating out is good in modern life Agree 61
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after high school Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...re is a critical controversy related to the question of whether or not we should hold huge partities an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...arties. These are important events in a persons life and cannot be ignored. On the ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, second, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07291666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90284215439 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5475707497 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225201576877 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601657022895 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369826895908 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114731926866 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411982059509 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.