On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
● describe the item you lost
● explain how you lost it
● tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently lost an item while traveling to Vietnam.
At the onset, the item that has been lost is my Sony HD Camera. It was a brand new camera, which I bought last year from New York and it costed me around $1000. It was packed in a brown leather bag for safety along with a keyring hanging on the side chain. It has 10 GB memory and all functions for latest photography.
While I was traveling to Ho Chi Minh city, I intended to lost it somewhere between the Macmillan hotel and the airport. As during the last day of my trip, my wife’ s mother got injured from a major accident. We had to board the flight in a hurry and thus forgot to check our accessories and belongings.
Although I have already reported the matter to the lost and found department, I have not received any positive response from officials. As I am entitled for complete refund against the lost item, I would like to claim for my insured camera. Please tell me the further procedure so that I can expedite the process of claim.
I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully
John Milton
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...00. It was packed in a brown leather bag for safety along with a keyring hanging ...
^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th a keyring hanging on the side chain. It has 10 GB memory and all functions for ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41509433962 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39990061501 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2670559281 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269884157931 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081361190204 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955915306006 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156882572272 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121794147548 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.