Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
‘Student Life is Golden Life’ as all we know adolescent’s years are more memorable than anything in this world and those happiest moments cannot be forgotten throughout the life. Some people believe that teenager’s life is happier than the adults’ life. However, others think that vice versa even with higher-end responsibilities of adults. This essay will discuss both the view points and gives the final opinion.
Adult’s life is so precious time with financial freedom and extreme responsibilities of families. The most people at this age will not be able to enjoy even with the freedom of finance as they will get very least amount of time for amusement. As a result, they will lose plenty of happiest moments. It is most likely to say their happiness is at low-level in most the time as they are needed to take care of their families.
However, adolescents are free of above pressure. At this age, they are least bothered about responsibilities and they can enjoy however they want. For instance, teenagers not worried too much about household responsibilities such as buying groceries or garments to house because in most cases this is responsibility of elders in the house. Instead, they will take part in special occasions such as birthday parties, Marriages and house opening ceremonies. These occasions keep them happy all the time.
Furthermore, teenagers are having complete freedom of time. They have enough time to enjoy all events even in school days and in college days they can take part and, they can spend time happily with their immediate family members. Most of the teenagers, for example, are enjoy their summer holidays with their grandparents (Mum Side) in India, it is quite common nowadays.
To conclude, although adults are having financial freedom with higher responsibilities, teenagers will have more options to enjoy their life with freedom of time. In my opinion, adolescents are happier than the adults as they are having complete independence of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of the happiest
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Suggestion: enjoyed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96384525545 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4453747913 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6111111111 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204757469155 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695601145139 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529760546153 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117786530766 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735805885921 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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