Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The issue of which stage of life brings us more contentment and joy is often debatable by many. some argue that adolescence is the most enjoyable part of our lives, I partially agree to this thought. this essay will discuss how devoid of responsibilities and freedom to make mistakes contribute to this view also analyze exhilarfion of not being accountable to anyone in later phase of lives with relevant example.
On one hand, most people often have profound memories and relationships from their teeange years. this is mainly due to the fact that many teenagers possesing hint of innocence and ignorance. it ensures that freindships forged are not based out of necessity or expectations. being delusional to consequences most often than not lead to some wild experiences. In addition to this, as youthful age is considered a learning phase, it is encouraged that youngsters make mistakes until they learn from it and also in expectations of not repeating it. To ilustrate this, an Oxford study carried out by psychology students states that, 75% of succesful long lasting relationships are either from highschool or college days. Thus, it is possible to say that adolescence is a defining stage where one is free to make mistakes and also build relationships resulting in happier life.
Although there is a case for teenage being joyous stage of many indviduals live's, freedom associated with adulthood cannot be understated. one is free to lead a life on his or her own terms which in itself gives an adrenaline rush to many. being an adult opens up various doors and multitude of choices such as switching careers , taking a break from life consequently giving a chance to explore life to the fullest. Even if responsibilities create a doubt prior to making a choice, it is often the person who is making the decison face consequences. Therefore it is conclusively clear that being independent offers liberation and little accountability to others which is crucial in leadina stressfree,peaceful life.
In conclusion, both teenage and adulthood have their perks and rights which makes life memorable in respective stages however, I personally believe that naivety and innocence of teenage comprise happier times in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13774104683 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06200637581 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589531680441 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.965090626 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158175204037 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470761195742 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342091251768 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098969792585 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249774614407 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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