Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most
people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of
greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people,especially youngers, believe that at adult ages,would have a happier life from their current status. On the opposite side, some adults admit that teenage years was the best time of their life.In my opinion ,adults would experience more enjoyable moments from teenagers.
For some individuals, teenage years might be the best time of their life. Although they might not have enough money, they had lots of friends which gave them the opportunity to accumulate money on holding parties or went on a economical holiday together without any common worries,they are faceing these days. But this fun activities are not the only criteria of being happy.
in spite of assume the heavy responsibility , adults will have a happier moments from their perior ages. some people had been working hard since early 20s,so at the age of 30 and above, they will be in comfort zoon. Consequently, they will earn more money to spend it in preferable hobbies. for example they travel almost every desired place or buy as many clothes as they want and these will bring joy in their life. Besides, this period is longer than teenage years, so they will be in touch with happiness stimule more often.A Person can waits for a several good events to come. for example, getting a high-paied job, falling in love with someone and having babies are the most enjoable moments in his life.
In conclusion, teenagers have a cheerful sprites due to exess energy and emotional feelings that they frequently experience. But these feelings are temporary and if they strive for a better future, under any circumstances, they will have a more splore and take action for even more satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98566308244 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60918462125 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6684734522 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170244170453 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066340031597 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526432072524 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10606461764 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458664200356 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.