Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness.
It is thought by some people that years of studying at schools, colleges, universities are more interesting and attractive than life when you grown up. I can’t totally agree with this statement. There are various reasons that caused the situation and the following essay will discuss about them and some things that people could do to address the problem.
This point of view is shared by people who can’t find an appropriate activity for themselves after education facility’s completion. Thus, new born graduate can spend a lot of time searching a decent job position. If there are no results he will be compelled to take a place in less desirable company or even get a job not related to his specialty. As a result, people who trapped in such situations could be stuck in not wanted company for a long time. Such situation can course different consequences, like depression, mental related problems at cetera.
Nevertheless, years of childhood have its own advantages. There is no need to earn money to feed your family, you don’t have to be afraid of losing your job, you have a lot of leisure time to do whatever you want. But these benefits don’t mean that your life will end when you grown up.
There are a lot of benefits people may have in their mature age. The main advantage of it is children. I think, there is no happiest moment in life of every single man than the day his child born. This is apparently other stage of man’s life. Our children are our future and we will happy if our future is making the world better.
In conclusion, I want to say they there is only one cure for yearning and depression. It’s work. When we have a work we interested in, we have some purpose, some goals to achieve. So, you don’t have to be young to be happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'grew'?
Suggestion: grew
...t mean that your life will end when you grown up. There are a lot of benefits peo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['apparently', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221932114883 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.190600522193 0.155533422707 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.065274151436 0.0946595960268 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313315926893 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0783289817232 0.0437548338989 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0939947780679 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0391644908616 0.0403226058552 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68276453812 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287206266319 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0731070496084 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0287206266319 0.021408717616 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0182767624021 0.011925033212 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1808.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70347003155 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287066246057 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217665615142 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16403785489 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119873817035 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68276453812 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 65.0420334641 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.85 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2114971822 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 37.6165615142 49.1944974215 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.18260869565 1.69124875643 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223104098131 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0797390790653 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696448351522 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461493726615 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1465816004 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715268902233 0.134430193775 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756793232934 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.144715458439 0.324371583561 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0140020974671 0.0638462369009 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139333482971 0.228012699653 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115767128812 0.058150111329 199% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.