Some people think that the teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the teenagers and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In fast paced world, multi-tasking is the key to success. Youngsters along with their studies should be involved in performing some relevant jobs which are unpaid is favoured by some masses and they also believe that it will be beneficial to the community as well as to the teenagers. I agree with the above statement and will justify in upcoming paragraphs citing few examples.
Person keeps on learning whole his life from the society. However, nowadays, youngsters have restricted themselves by sticking to the screens. This has made them lazy and reluctant to perform anything in outside world. They spend hours on playing games or watching videos on their gadgets. So, to change this scenario, their help can be taken in form of jobs for the betterment of future. For instance, their knowledge of using gadgets can be utilised by the local community to learn more about the technology. Youngsters can aware the society by providing the benefits of different equipments and which people in society can use when it is required like purchasing things online and many more.
In addition to this, today's teenagers are very well versed with all the issues happening in the world. They have ample amount of knowledge which they can share with lower class generation which will be fruitful in long- term. To illustrate, usage of liquid petroleum gas for cooking instead of burning wood or cow dung or how to conserve for future. Beside this, youngsters are good in sports and know the techniques related to them. They can provide basic knowledge to the children of their community and help them to get fine and they can even easily excel in these sports if they want.
To sum up, teenagers use their leisure time for imparting knowledge or helping others without any monetary benefits is a great step but should not be done at the cost of studies which they are already pursuing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as for, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50461293167 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5592165189 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26842948323 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755454468986 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530532198014 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160825064758 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107606103162 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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