Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree ?
It the true that many people believe that all youngsters help the community by doing unpaid work in their spare time. While I agree that this would benefit both teenagers and society, I disagree that all teenagers should be forced to do volunteer work in their free time.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why volunteer work would benefit themselves and society. One reason is that unpaid work allows teenagers to broaden their own knowledge of different fields in life through real experiences. As a result, they can solve problems. Another factor is that teenagers not only enlarge their knowledge but also develop their soft skills through volunteer work such as communication skill, teamwork skill, time management skill. That skills help them enhance their resume and give them countless opportunities when seeking a job in the future.
On the other hand, I do not agree that teenagers should be forced to do unpaid works. Firstly, the incredible pressure of studying at school accounts for a great deal of how teenagers spend their time. If they spend their spare time in doing volunteer work, they will not have time to do homework, relax and rest. Secondly, teenagers need time to enjoy themselves, develop hobbies and help parents. It is necessary to explore myself and improve my knowledge.
In conclusion, although I accept that working as a volunteer can be beneficial for teenagers, I disagree with idea that they should be forced to do unpaid work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01219512195 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56514372385 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0650358866 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476288350667 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169736359785 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13338932623 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317556171653 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13900480152 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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