Some people think there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether noise should be limited. While some individuals
believe the level of noise being created should be strictly controlled, I would argue that
people should have the right to produce noise if they want to.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should control the amount
of noise produced. The first reason is that too much noise can significantly affect people's
health. Living in a place that is too noisy can cause problems such as headaches, which can
decrease the health levels of people, especially old ones. Additionally, noise can disturb
people's work or study. For example, a university student will not be able to concentrate
on his preparation for exams if his neighbours keep singing too loud.
However, I believe people should be allowed make as much noise as they want because of
some reasons. Firstly, producing noise is sometimes considered a type of recreational
activities. For instance, singing or cheering for a football club can be relaxing, and
everyone has the right to do those things. Secondly, as the world is becoming more modern,
people have found ways to deal with the problem of noise. Scientists have invented walls
and windows that can block out the noise, which allows individuals to focus on their work
without being disturbed. Therefore, the problem of noise can be reduced and there is no
need for people to keep quiet.
In conclusion, while many people believe there should be controls about noise, I believe
we have the right to create noise when we want to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10305343511 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56659169441 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3206438432 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284116255657 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110662007261 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105133029248 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932296849464 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882603415801 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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