Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question of whether only success at work makes life meaningful remains a source of controversy in these days. While many people believe that pursuing a good career is the most important thing in life, I argue that there are innumerable other factors that makes a man happy & contented.
Firstly, there are numerous people on our planet with different strengths and weakness. Fortunately, some people find happiness in working as they consider their work as hobbies, not responsibilities. For instance, doctors who devote their life in saving others, have to experience a long term of continuous study, research as well as practice. Their contribution should be considered as a significant achievement. Whereas, there are many successful professionals who only considers work as a way to earn money. Thus, many rich people, who succeed in their profession are not always happy with their lives, still, find themselves lonely in the crowd.
To elucidate my stance further, the other main aspect is self-actualization. Self-actualization occurs when you maximize your potential, doing the best you are capable of doing, which may be your job, favorite activities such as sports, traveling, painting or even something ambiguous. Success in career certainly makes us joyful, but that is one aspect. Human fulfillment is way beyond job succession. For instance, a house wife feels succeeded and happy raising up her children with good manners, no need to be a powerful businessman or a leading professional.
In conclusion, working may be a method to earn money and have high social status. However, without success in career, people still can have a meaningful life by a variety of activities which depends on our choice and attitude towards life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether only success at work makes life meaning...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27598566308 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08415966129 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.754838348 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248172549356 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730258549108 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779502515025 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156915231222 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748351200791 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.