some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. discuss both the views and give your opinion.
There has always been an argument about whether to go for something new or just stay with what on knows. Some people agree to previous thought, while other accept the later idea. I have discussed both the views and have given my opinion at the end.
Taking into consideration the views of former, trying new things will make people to aff novel items to their list which will provide them with more choices in future. For example, a wanderlust while exploring finds a place which is very calm, clean, and refreshing makes him add that place to his list among the places where one can sit and relax. Furthermore, taking a trip to unknown place will help humans to use their problem skills and overcome the challanges. It is noticed that people who believe in choosing unfamiliar option are better able to cope as they learn from past experience and try to use that knowledge to solve the exisiting issue. Hence, unfamiliar places works as a best way support social and cognitive ability of an individual.
Taking into account the ideas of later, familiar places or food save one's money, time and energy. For instance, the individual who likes mexican food will always go for mexican food as they know the taste and the way they like that, so if they go for new cuisine and they do not like then it will be the waste of their money. Therefore, known things are better than the unknown things.
In my opinion, sticking with familiar things are better as it allows and individual gets to know more about the same thing. for instance, visiting Taj Mahal again and again will give chance to and individual to close notice all the parts of the that learn about the their hiatory. Hence, visiting same plave will make individual knowledgeable about that one specific location.
to conclude, both the views have their own advantages.
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Suggestion: the; their
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.746875 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31055450258 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1089479701 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340001433154 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936733852751 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529832156987 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162840736872 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053204255788 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.