some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with
It is believed that, in presently some people like to try new things, such as visit new places, or buy food in new restaurant. But other people prefer to keep doing things they are familliar with. In this essay, i completely agree with first statement, because it has more merit rather than demeerit for some reason.
In the one hand, the main benefit of try new somethings is make people have many exsperience about somethings. It is because it can development their knowledge. For example people that like try new things, ussualy have many friends and have many topic to share with others. As result they be easier survive in many conditions, and easy to adaptation in new environment.
However, there are some drawbacks about this issue. Firstly, regulary more many people that like to always visit the familiar place or eat the familiar food. it is due tue maybe they ever try new things, but their review is bad. For instance i ever invite my friends to go new cafe, and then my friend said the cafe is not good, the price frice is expensive and taste of food bad. So that, currently if i want to join hangout with her, i always visit the same cafe. It is her favorite cafe. Secondly, if someone always visit the same things like same place, they might feel more comfortable. It is because they have ussualy with conditions of place. For example people do not confused to find located a glass, water, wastafel, or tissue. they do not need to ask with waitress, because they have know. Nevertheless, is easier and comfort for people. It is important to alwas feel happy in your journey.
To sum up, where i stand, i belived that often try new things have many benefit to people knowledge, to have many moment in their life. In my oppinion i suggest people to try many things, so they can compare something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun topic seems to be countable; consider using: 'many topics'.
Suggestion: many topics
...ngs, ussualy have many friends and have many topic to share with others. As result they be...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...amiliar place or eat the familiar food. it is due tue maybe they ever try new thin...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aste of food bad. So that, currently if i want to join hangout with her, i always...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'visits'.
Suggestion: visits
...orite cafe. Secondly, if someone always visit the same things like same place, they m...
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Line 3, column 738, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ed a glass, water, wastafel, or tissue. they do not need to ask with waitress, becau...
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Line 3, column 795, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...to ask with waitress, because they have know. Nevertheless, is easier and comfort fo...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...appy in your journey. To sum up, where i stand, i belived that often try new thi...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
... belived that often try new things have many benefit to people knowledge, to have many momen...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun moment seems to be countable; consider using: 'many moments'.
Suggestion: many moments
...ny benefit to people knowledge, to have many moment in their life. In my oppinion i suggest...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ny moment in their life. In my oppinion i suggest people to try many things, so t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6049382716 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.381068323 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5765103248 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0476190476 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488575404022 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133725742777 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119373027942 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310366016187 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125819568262 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.