Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems.Is it a positive or negative development?Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.
Currently, the Internet plays a vital role in all aspects of human life. Some people use the Internet to solve their medical problems and find solutions to their problems.If this is true, it can affect the health of the community.
The Internet is a source of diverse and essential information that millions of people around the world use. The Internet has had a huge impact on a variety of areas, including the health sector. Disease management is vital to improving health and quality of life outcomes, making this more accessible through the Internet.However, searching the internet for information on everything, especially medical and health issues, is now inevitable, even though doctors may find it disruptive, which is why some doctors are trying to teach them the right way to deal with medical information. On the Internet. One of their suggested ways is content validation; they say, if possible, compare information you have obtained online with other sources such as authoritative books and journals because the content of the book is usually higher than the content on the Internet.
With the advent of communication technologies over time and access to all sorts of information, most people turn to the Internet before they can see a doctor for treatment and perhaps even try a treatment.Going through the diagnosis process to treatment based on medical information we have obtained from various Internet sources is sometimes not costly because it can be mixed with personal experiences, relying on knowledge that is in many cases not reliable. People are exposed to diseases or based on findings that have not yet been proven useful in medical science.Many of us have had some personal experiences with this problem, for example, a mother who exacerbates stress by seeing her child's early symptoms of an illness and sometimes by referring her child to several doctors, believing it to be based on online information. It leads to perhaps the diagnosis of one of them approaching its own diagnosis, and the risk is doubled that it also seeks treatment and initiates self-treatment.
In conclusion,I believe that although the Internet can be effective in treating illnesses, it can cause irreparable damage if the information available about the disease is incorrect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2472826087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00573942948 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.933898308 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.545454545 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4545454545 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196203195986 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873311257191 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690629988491 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125523132827 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744641601262 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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