You find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.
Dear Ms Smith,
I am Harry Singh, student of your prestigious institution. Recently I enrolled my self in two computer courses namely Web designing and Computer Animation, my enrollment id is CS1457. With due respect, I am writing this letter to withdraw my admission.
I found myself fortunate enough to secure a seat in two of the courses. I enjoyed those courses a lot initially as they were my hobbies but the endless assignments and tedious project work had overburdened me. As I enrolled myself into those courses to polish my skills but with my job and family responsibilities, I do not find myself benefiting from those courses.
Also my sister got her left leg fractured so I have to give much more time to family. I would not be able to continue these course. It would be really appreciated if you could offer my seat to some other student and refund my fee so that I could use that money for the readmission again next year or any other free time.
I will be grateful to you. Looking forward for a positive feedback from you soon.
Yours Sincerely.
Harry Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...yself benefiting from those courses. Also my sister got her left leg fractured so...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69109947644 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74798794297 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0270668856 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143466962515 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579136969459 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504972754425 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085433272504 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413221891803 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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